Just a couple slight art-inconsistencies:- for the last couple pages, the bed head-board has been ‘missing’, and… how did ‘Nisho and Ren manage to switch places after Billy Ray Vampo de-gassed and tossed them?
Was thinking maybe there were two beds, one with and one without head-boards and BRV passed between the girls before reforming and throwing them, but Wendy is still in the same spot and so is the chair
Not a complaint, just pointing things out (still hoping that that time-stopper Ren clicked will have had some effect 🙂 )
Thank you, Guesticules! I have solved the case of the missing headboard and the Reny Tirinisho switch — I’ve revised pages 7 and 8 (putting the missing headboard back and correctly positioning our heroines so that they could be thrown in the correct direction by Frilengo!)
You are welcome, and this is another reason why you are one of the Great Artists: you don’t take it personal when someone points out something that might be an error, and, if it is, you fix it (even if it means more work (like with redesigning those panels with Reny and Tirinisho: not only repositioning them, but changing the dialogue as well)
Ehm … I rarely complain about visual details because the story matters more, but … if Frilengo is a vampire, why does he have a reflection in the mirror (Panel 3)?
He is a different sort of vampire, possibly only called a ‘vampire’ at all because his race (not from Earth) happen to feed on the blood of other races and species
Even the vamps from Earth have different ‘rules’ they follow
16 thoughts on “Chapter 23, page 9 – Is that made of silver?”
Guesticules
Pick a hole Ren, or make one 🙂
Guesticules
Is… that a double ended butt-plug? o_O
Raznaak
ASS TO ASS
Joe Fonebone
Looks more like a long handled Dildo/vibrator, for getting in there good and deep.
Guesticules
Talking about the black one, clearly butt-plug on one end, not the large Hulk-buster
Joe Fonebone
The shiny one, it looks kind of universal, and beginner sized.
Guesticules
Just a couple slight art-inconsistencies:- for the last couple pages, the bed head-board has been ‘missing’, and… how did ‘Nisho and Ren manage to switch places after Billy Ray Vampo de-gassed and tossed them?
Was thinking maybe there were two beds, one with and one without head-boards and BRV passed between the girls before reforming and throwing them, but Wendy is still in the same spot and so is the chair
Not a complaint, just pointing things out (still hoping that that time-stopper Ren clicked will have had some effect 🙂 )
merceneiress
Thank you, Guesticules! I have solved the case of the missing headboard and the Reny Tirinisho switch — I’ve revised pages 7 and 8 (putting the missing headboard back and correctly positioning our heroines so that they could be thrown in the correct direction by Frilengo!)
Guesticules
You are welcome, and this is another reason why you are one of the Great Artists: you don’t take it personal when someone points out something that might be an error, and, if it is, you fix it (even if it means more work (like with redesigning those panels with Reny and Tirinisho: not only repositioning them, but changing the dialogue as well)
merceneiress
👍
thorstenv
2nd that.
H'Sishi
Ehm … I rarely complain about visual details because the story matters more, but … if Frilengo is a vampire, why does he have a reflection in the mirror (Panel 3)?
Guesticules
Because he is ‘special’ kind of vamp (yes, noticed the reflection as well, but this is something that doesn’t need correcting)
merceneiress
Thank you, H’Sishi – you’re right! Panel 3 corrected (as well as in the two previous pages)
Guesticules
He is a different sort of vampire, possibly only called a ‘vampire’ at all because his race (not from Earth) happen to feed on the blood of other races and species
Even the vamps from Earth have different ‘rules’ they follow
Lloyd
. . . and the big green one wielded by the other hand as a distraction.